Friday, April 17, 2015

Cluck Like a Chicken

Eyes       move
left     -     right
back - n - forth
left     -     right
lulling the mind
left     -     right
into submission
       snap



On inspiration for this piece: This idea was pulled from Poetic Asides's 2015 April PAD Challenge: Day 17. "For today’s prompt, write a swing poem."

3 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

:) another beautiful work coming out wonderfully!!

Jeff said...

Very creative--reading the poem provides just the experience you describe. Perfect!

Björn Rudberg said...

I love the effect you got. It's got movement in it,