Sunday, April 5, 2015

BASH

BASH
abuse
castigate

as "accident prone"
as she is, frozen peas
are a staple in her fridge

"physical or mental assault."



A note on form:  This is a clarity pyramid.  I have written these on multiple occasions....there is something about them that I just find interesting (and a bit challenging).  I even created a new space to explore/expose them a little more; I call it, Defining Moments.

On inspiration for this piece:  This idea was pulled from Poetic Asides's 2015 April PAD Challenge: Day 5. The theme for this prompt was vegetable.  Okay, so the poem is not about the vegetable, but it does have a vegetable in it.

3 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...

I really admire how you beautifully bring out the " beauty" of every form through your poems:)best wishes...........

Buddah Moskowitz said...

Interesting combinations and connections here. Very well done.

Mary said...

A unique use of vegetables.....unfortunately, perhaps not uncommon.