Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Lune: Sweet Spot

Music Workshop at Castle Goldrain
by Claudia Schoenfeld

Lune:  Sweet Spot

#1 (Kelly Lune)
notes kissing earlobes
awaken
passion deep within

#2 (Collom Lune)
it's the sax
with notes slow dancing together
that seduces me



Inspiration for this piece:  If only I could be this good after 9 months...over at dVerse Poets Pub, the walls have been decorated with some lovely artwork by one of the dVerse community members, pubtender and proprietors of the pub.  You can learn more about Claudia and her art at dVerse: Poetics - Sketching it Out, check out her work on Flicker, or her poetry at jaywalking the moon.

21 comments:

Björn Rudberg said...

Notes kissing earlobes.. what a wonderful line.. that's what music should be :-)

Björn Rudberg said...

Notes kissing earlobes.. what a wonderful line.. that's what music should be :-)

Brian Miller said...

oh the sax can def seduce me as well....smiles...and i agree with bjorn...inspired line

Heaven said...

That's a potent seduction ~ Enjoyed your lune poems ~

georgeplaceblog said...

wonderful lunes... kissing earlobes - dancing notes... nice.

Michael Grogan said...

'Notes kissing earlobes' suggests an ability to feel the music which is every one's goal with music. You have captured it so very well.

Gabriella said...

You have described what music should be. I enjoyed your sensual illustrations of Claudia's painting. And I learns what a lune was.

Mary said...

Oh yes, it IS the sax indeed!! Blame it on the sax.

Myrna R. said...

These are great. They go so well with the sketch. The sax is my favorite instrument. It does seduce me.

Kathy said...

hmmm.......would love to be slow dancing in this sketch and poem....I've forgotten what that feels like until now ;)

thecourseofourseasons.com said...

sweet and sexy - beautiful!

Peggy said...

Some wonderful lines here! Lovely.

Glenn Buttkus said...

I love the Sax, but it is the cello that ranks highest with me; nice Lune journey; I prefer the Collom Lune myself; nice job; cheers for Claudia, applause for you.

Cressida de Nova said...

The saxophone is very seductive.

De said...

Love the lune, and these are lovely.

Sumana Roy said...

love the spirit and beautiful phrases here..

Claudia said...

oh i love the Notes kissing earlobes....and playing a bit of saxophone myself i get lost in those slow dancing notes in no time... smiles

Arathi Harihar said...

wonderful lunes..just like claudia's sketches..it sure is inspiring everyone ..smiles..

kaykuala said...

it's the sax
with notes slow
dancing together

Love this rmp! One can never get enough of sax. One just melt!

Hank

Poet Laundry said...

The sax is so smooth...nicely done and fun.

Margaret said...

it's the sax… yes that is a sexy instrument. ha. I also love the piano and cello.