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Origami Hope
Hope brings tears to my eyes;
logic would assign these precious pearls
with a joyous & uplifting tempo,
but tears are a fickle thing,
their truth held only
in the eyes shedding them.
yes,
hope brings tears to the surface,
but they are sad
dark
su
ff
o
cat
in
g
streams
threatening to consume.
Sometimes I think
if I could
I would fold every single hope lying within me
up
into tiny little paper seeds
& blow them away
leaving me a bald dandelion head
bowed in the darkness where light
cannot trick me into feeling
more.
but I know
I'd shed tears
for their loss.
(what am I without hope?)
I'd rather watch those tiny white puffs
float along my dark oceanic tears–
life rafts for me to cling to
as the darkness looks to pull
me
under.
Post by Tyler Knott |
TWLOHA's 2014 Campaign for National Suicide Prevention Week (NSPW14) |
"There Is Still Some Time" poster based on blog post by Jamie Tworkowski, TWLOHA Founder. |
13 comments:
the imagery of folding everything single hope is very powerful... I love the idea of origami and those papers seeds - plant them, don't blow them away!
and even though you say that labor of love isn't for you, it remains, still... lovely writes
*every single*... ugh, typos suck...
this beautifully captures the deep sorrow of depression in lovely imagery.
love that image with the folding hope into paper seeds...we don't know what would happen...they would maybe multiply thousand-fold like dandelions...would be cool to be able to spread hope like that but def. the fear of letting go and not knowing what's left then... felt
The streaming lines are such a powerful addition to the imagery of those folded hopes. To cat those dandelion seed and fly to salvation.. Very good.
The first one Still is very powerful and heartfelt. I would love to use this to write a poem to if I may.
Also thank you for the info about app. A helpful random act of giving always comes as such a susrprise to me. I think you are a talented poet.I don't give praise lightly.
We all need hope in our lives. The images that you have written are strong ones. I like the idea of folding up every single hope & blowing them away.
The darkness of depression sometimes it feels like there is no hope... nice job of portraying
Excellent work RMP. These are among my favorite reads of this prompt. I think Origami Hope is one of my all time favorites of yours.
And truly, "No one else can play your part." Keep playing.
please, feel free to write to Still. I'm glad to know you find it so inspiring.
I love both of these--both powerfully document the feelings of hopelessness that too many have to deal with. Hope often betrays, but we can't live without it. Excellent writing!
I admire the imagery of origami hope & bald dandelion head ~ Cry if we must, but surely there's hope even if darkness pulls us under ~ Love the word format btw ~
love the wonderful imagery...powerful, moving & intense....
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