words—strategically creating the perfect balance—pierce the air with ease striking straight through the heart, penetrating defenses before you know what's hit you
the title sets the emotion in this...afraid of missing that last look in case they dont...nice short
Now this is poetry. So well crafted.
Ahhhh, this is very good! One of the reasons I love poetry is just this--so much can be said is so few words, as long as the poet chooses words wisely. You certainly have done so here!
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