Tuesday, April 8, 2014

A Tale of Love (and Woe) – Lovers' Song #6

Knight #6


Princess #6




This series is a branch-off of a ten act ballad called A Tale of Love and Woe.

On a side note:  I recently sat down and started toying with the final act of A Tale of Love and Woe.  As I have previously admitted, by the time I got to act ten of this ballad I was quite exhausted of meter and rhyme; and so I short changed the final act.  Since, as the original leads you to believe, I have no intention of revisiting this story beyond what is already written, I thought it would be nice to write a true or at least better ending.  Hopefully, I'll iron out the kinks soon and share the tale in its entirety here.

5 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ha. i like how these play off each other...little hints of their scent...only to find they asked the wind to carry it to them...its cool....

Grace said...

Love both shares, short & sweet ~

Victoria said...

This is just lovely. I'm so enjoying these.

Mary said...

I love both the form and the content. Beautiful work.

kkkkaty said...

Original and more meaningful for the style in which you presented them than if simply written...nice.