the truth behind the lies you spewed;
no longer will I be subdued!
be gone with you! be gone with you!
I thought our love was free to fly,
but I was wrong - you can't deny;
you tied me down with every lie!
I will not cry! I will not cry!
though every part of me's in pain,
I won't allow the tears to rain
to satisfy your heart - so vain!
I shall restrain! I shall restrain!
now go before my wrath takes flight
and squishes you with all its might;
it has a healthy appetite!
die parasite! die parasite!
A note on form: I find the monotetra to be quite a fun form to read--not necessarily one to write, though it does have its moments. (Though not fond of writing in rhyme, it does give off a nice ring.) While I'm not 100% sure whether the intent for the form was to be written in iambic tetrameter, I decided to give it a whirl (to the best of my ability).
3 comments:
ha it is fun to read...all the rhyming and repeated end line is cool...ugh on the lies...betrayal sucks!
cool title too..smiles.
Some deep thoughts here. I also like the title and the form. Some excellent rhymes...but it sounds as if you have a good handle on the situation!
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