words—strategically creating the perfect balance—pierce the air with ease striking straight through the heart, penetrating defenses before you know what's hit you
Wow, RMP, these little poems are full of beauty. I love the thought of the Princess, the image of a heart skipping like a pebble cast into a pond came to my mind. I haven't been good with keeping up with blogs and such (other's blogs as well as my own neglected one--I suppose it's just of those times in my life when I couldn't find whatever it takes to write and comment. Glad you stopped by mine, VERY glad to see you still producing some great writing!
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Delightful!
cool series....love the touch to see you free...and the letting me...there is a humble innocence to this...
very cool... the second one made me think of something starting to swing in the resonance frequency when stirred by a frequency close to their own...
Wow, RMP, these little poems are full of beauty. I love the thought of the Princess, the image of a heart skipping like a pebble cast into a pond came to my mind. I haven't been good with keeping up with blogs and such (other's blogs as well as my own neglected one--I suppose it's just of those times in my life when I couldn't find whatever it takes to write and comment. Glad you stopped by mine, VERY glad to see you still producing some great writing!
So much said in so few words.. the pebble one really touched me...
Both are lovely ~ Such a challenge to create short but intriguing lines ~
Setting one another's hearts a flutter as one --- sounds like perfection to me.
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