words—strategically creating the perfect balance—pierce the air with ease striking straight through the heart, penetrating defenses before you know what's hit you
I really like how your words float.
This is like a haiga ~ poignant sadness ~
nice tight capture of the moment...and something just a bit deeper...
Steathy feel to this at all levels.
beautifully done, the (seemingly random) placement of the words in the ether around the lone figure gives this poem incredible strength...i also wanted to say how much i love the Glistening Streams haiku at your "don't open" site (but couldn't find a way to comment there)
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