Saturday, September 7, 2013

Alone

Alone

5 comments:

Laurie Kolp said...

I really like how your words float.

Heaven said...

This is like a haiga ~ poignant sadness ~

Brian Miller said...

nice tight capture of the moment...and something just a bit deeper...

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Steathy feel to this at all levels.

turtlememoir said...

beautifully done, the (seemingly random) placement of the words in the ether around the lone figure gives this poem incredible strength...

i also wanted to say how much i love the Glistening Streams haiku at your "don't open" site (but couldn't find a way to comment there)