tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post8694114542394951795..comments2023-05-30T03:44:04.995-04:00Comments on Like the Feathers of an Arrow: In the BreezeRMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-35339897333714239172014-03-14T18:59:33.231-04:002014-03-14T18:59:33.231-04:00I especially like that last stanza. Nicely done R...I especially like that last stanza. Nicely done RMP.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-20151164721054145762014-03-14T12:46:19.432-04:002014-03-14T12:46:19.432-04:00Short & full of imagery ~ I love what you cre...Short & full of imagery ~ I love what you created with just a few words ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-72777524727574498672014-03-14T00:05:54.393-04:002014-03-14T00:05:54.393-04:00This is very meaningful poem in so few words. Ther...This is very meaningful poem in so few words. There seems to be a contrast of ideas in the stanzas - clinging vs. expelling. The latter stanza can be taken two different ways, too - life and death. Very well done. :-) Thanks for the heads up about the form. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-72601630405840008372014-03-13T19:16:46.763-04:002014-03-13T19:16:46.763-04:00I like this form and what you did with it. You mad...I like this form and what you did with it. You made feel with your words - succinct and accurate!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-23937097264496135272014-03-13T16:49:58.747-04:002014-03-13T16:49:58.747-04:00I had no idea what a septolet was until today. I l...I had no idea what a septolet was until today. I like the subtle balance between your two stanzas.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-90934025315686711982014-03-13T16:49:47.159-04:002014-03-13T16:49:47.159-04:00No matter what happens, we still have wishes and w...No matter what happens, we still have wishes and we still have hope. An upbeat message with lovely photos as inspirations.vb holmeshttp://vbreverb.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-39612545445155342892014-03-13T16:37:04.729-04:002014-03-13T16:37:04.729-04:00What a powerful write. I really like the last sta...What a powerful write. I really like the last stanza. We all need to find the seeds of hope.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-84963006342169056702014-03-13T14:18:05.351-04:002014-03-13T14:18:05.351-04:00Breath-taking. I enjoyed being introduced to the f...Breath-taking. I enjoyed being introduced to the form as well. I didn't get the photo for some reason but between the poem and your process notes I could visualize it well.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-62039876634903242792014-03-13T01:31:19.107-04:002014-03-13T01:31:19.107-04:00I think I love the detailed explanation of your pi...I think I love the detailed explanation of your piece as much as I loved your micro, the photos are absolutely amazing also - thank you ~ smilesAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-74879678676252546992014-03-13T00:53:59.868-04:002014-03-13T00:53:59.868-04:00i love the seeds of hope there in the end...so com...i love the seeds of hope there in the end...so comforting when they're still there even though the time is difficult..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-78103571604227322362014-03-12T22:43:04.615-04:002014-03-12T22:43:04.615-04:00I especially love:
"still breath
expels
seed...I especially love: <br />"still breath<br />expels<br />seeds of hope" <br /><br />Beautiful. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-66802212915191404182014-03-12T21:54:11.638-04:002014-03-12T21:54:11.638-04:00Yay! I have new form for my poetry notebook. A sep...Yay! I have new form for my poetry notebook. A septolet is next on my list to try. I love how you translated the pictures...lovely work!Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-24098493943473046862014-03-12T21:34:18.364-04:002014-03-12T21:34:18.364-04:00Such beautiful and peaceful words - glad you could...Such beautiful and peaceful words - glad you could join in. Abhrahttp://www.abhrapal.innoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-22523907535166680452014-03-12T20:29:07.300-04:002014-03-12T20:29:07.300-04:00Ah so good. Thanks for sharing in the narrative as...Ah so good. Thanks for sharing in the narrative as well. Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-27806700621974990622014-03-12T18:05:24.452-04:002014-03-12T18:05:24.452-04:00What a wonderful experience to read. What a great ...What a wonderful experience to read. What a great experience to read it and then look at the picture.. Great effectbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-55156133231421454632014-03-12T18:03:47.122-04:002014-03-12T18:03:47.122-04:00Very evocative of both dewdrops and dandelion puff...Very evocative of both dewdrops and dandelion puffballs - and thank you for introducing me to the septolet.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-47836324245583146982014-03-12T17:29:49.911-04:002014-03-12T17:29:49.911-04:00def nice when you can breath...and hope...no matte...def nice when you can breath...and hope...no matter the pressure...having a rough week here...so i am still breathing...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com