tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post6759082448101565593..comments2023-05-30T03:44:04.995-04:00Comments on Like the Feathers of an Arrow: Our Dance (is Finally Over)RMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-48132087078576525422013-05-26T21:48:22.967-04:002013-05-26T21:48:22.967-04:00I think you've created a wonderful romantic an...I think you've created a wonderful romantic angst, and it was great to hear you read it too.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-20679987504759576232013-05-25T23:29:39.303-04:002013-05-25T23:29:39.303-04:00I can name many, many musicians whose lyrics are a...I can name many, many musicians whose lyrics are as precise and meaningful and beautiful as any poet's, so your choice for the cabeza is, ultimately, a perfect choice. Your glosa then continues on to make use of musical metaphors - strumming fingers, old records, guitar strings, tunes - as referentials to the cabeza, and it's this consistency of approach and vocabulary that makes for a Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-66932933787236255492013-05-25T12:30:04.494-04:002013-05-25T12:30:04.494-04:00Beautifully done--the music metaphor is consistent...Beautifully done--the music metaphor is consistent, and so precise. Excellent!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-20711768661845531592013-05-25T02:07:49.985-04:002013-05-25T02:07:49.985-04:00Songs are just as much poetry as anything else. I ...Songs are just as much poetry as anything else. I love the story you tell (though sad ) brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-71279187086620686062013-05-24T22:17:05.598-04:002013-05-24T22:17:05.598-04:00Fine selection of quote (or music verse) ~
I like...Fine selection of quote (or music verse) ~<br /><br />I like the creative use of music in a relationship, though the ending is a bit sad with that bruised heart. <br /><br />Good work on the form and I can see the rhyming words in place ~ Wishing you a happy weekend ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-55756308393053305522013-05-24T22:17:04.983-04:002013-05-24T22:17:04.983-04:00I consider many musicians poets so your selection ...I consider many musicians poets so your selection holds up well for the glosa in my view and your poem holds up well, especially the reading of it. Nicely done. Truly.<br /><br />http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2013/05/table-for-four.html<br /><br />S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-41542718270417709882013-05-24T22:05:58.925-04:002013-05-24T22:05:58.925-04:00Nice work..and thanks for providing a reading of i...Nice work..and thanks for providing a reading of it : )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-68092031581770061632013-05-24T19:32:41.555-04:002013-05-24T19:32:41.555-04:00wow...very nicely done...and so emotive as well......wow...very nicely done...and so emotive as well...love the 3rd stanza for the whirlwind, and musical touches in it...do any of us have much to offer beyond our brokeness? i wonder...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-67363933624372196472013-05-24T18:34:18.737-04:002013-05-24T18:34:18.737-04:00Well composed. I admire you for attempting it. I...Well composed. I admire you for attempting it. It was just too challenging for me. (Sigh)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com