tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post4600394061214079807..comments2023-05-30T03:44:04.995-04:00Comments on Like the Feathers of an Arrow: Hope Is a Double-Edged Sword (& an update)RMPhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-87706636365461373172016-08-30T14:03:31.312-04:002016-08-30T14:03:31.312-04:00I do "hear" the song in this--a tormente...I do "hear" the song in this--a tormented refrain, but quite well done.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-16743497148350211822016-08-04T09:05:46.994-04:002016-08-04T09:05:46.994-04:00glosa is a difficult form but doesn't look lik...glosa is a difficult form but doesn't look like one reading the poem...you make it flow with spontaneity...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5244453500886317355.post-28207325461152284082016-08-03T20:28:22.281-04:002016-08-03T20:28:22.281-04:00it is an interesting dichotomy...fear of not lovin...it is an interesting dichotomy...fear of not loving...or being loved...fear of feeling, or being numb...where does that leave us...will it keep us from ever moving, for fear the risk might tip us one way or the next...<br /><br />regardless, i am glad it got you writing.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com